I spent the whole of last week on a writing course at Moniack Mhor, near Inverness. It was aimed at science-fiction and fantasy writers, with workshops in the mornings, led by the two tutors, Juliet McKenna and Pippa Goldschmidt, and the afternoons left free for individual writing time. I always find these kind of events really useful and enjoyable, but this one also provided me with a new focus for my writing as we head into 2017.
I’ve never been very good at revision. I’ll write a story quite quickly, then leave it a few days and come back to it to revise it before submission. However, no matter how much time I allow for this stage of the process, and no matter how long I spend rereading the piece, I rarely make very many changes. I find it very difficult to identify where the problems and areas for improvements might be, and even more difficult to know how to address them.
I have a particular story that I wrote back in January, and that I was quite pleased with at the time. It didn’t get anywhere in the competition it was written for, and it has since been rejected by four or five other publications throughout the year. So, I decided it would make a good piece to send in prior to last week’s course, for the tutors to give feedback on. I discussed it with both of them in depth, and also gave it to one of the other writers on the course to look at. For a story that was only 750 words long, it generated a huge amount of feedback, which was all very useful.
It gave me a lot to work with and multiple aspects to look at in a different way, and I spent the rest of the week rewriting, expanding and tweaking, as my brain kept seizing upon new turns of phrase and new bits of description I could add. I can say with some certainty that I’ve never expended so much time and effort on such a short story before, but it was definitely worth it. I read out the finished result (now 1500 words) on the last evening of the course, and got a very positive response from my audience. In particular, the three people who had read the original version all said it was much improved, despite some of their feedback being directly contradictory!
So, my plan for writing next year is going to be to attempt less, and spend more time on each individual piece of work. It has been brought home to me just how valuable an external perspective can be in motivating me to revise and re-work, so I plan to seek feedback much more widely and more consistently. I’m hoping this will result in a much higher quality in the finished products, and that will then result in more success with my submissions.
The hardest part will be narrowing down my options and not trying to submit to every single competition and anthology going!
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